sanctuary13's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Storytime: Church Flowers]

hehe

ignore that last poster. great job. its nice to see some non flash visuals occasionally.

[Mostly Metal Jacket]

stellar

nice and random, made no sense but didnt leave me scratchin my head. good job, and excellent musical selection

[The Western Crusade]

what the

no idea whats going on, but its great.

[Reached Moon]

right on

4 months? youre pickin it up quick. well thought out and well done... a few minor errors but with your experience its easily overlooked. great work and keep them coming!

[Punished.]

WHAT punchline?

dont ruin the punchline? ok i wont... THERE IS NO PUNCHLINE! its a kid who gets a bad report card, and cant go out, so he rubs one out. whoopdefriggin do. are you serious? the one redeeming value is the sound effect was good, but the voice recording was crap. go watch a will farrell movie or something, figure out what a joke is. anything. i mean, christ dude i hear more punchlines on cnn.

[the umpire strikes back]

grammar

im really so tired of people making notes about how long they took on things, or how much effort, and they cant even spell. im not looking for a grammar lesson, but jesus christ, learn the friggin language! if you dont speak english i can overlook things. either way, the first thing about this flash that jumps out is the amateurish nature of it. random sound clips dont count as audio. graphically, you need more practice. ive only been screwing around with flash for a few weeks and all my visuals look cleaner. remember, we dont know you, so your animation is our only exposure to you.. try to make it higher quality.

Flame-Reaper responds:

ok i agreee the gramma is shit, wot can i say i type to fast. But were in any part of my flash or my comentary have i mentioned how much time i spent on or how much effort the closest i came to that was saying it sounded funnier when my mate came up with the idea so before your give someone else a review weva it b gd or bad get ur facts rite.