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hehe

ignore that last poster. great job. its nice to see some non flash visuals occasionally.

hmmm

well first of all, let me say that evanescence blows. imho. processed crap forced emotional music. not to say she cant sing, she can, but c'mon. lets learn a new key. anyways, i expected to see just anoter lame ass flash based on an overhyped pseudo-goth song that showed some skater kid slashing his wrists. fahqing hell, that crap gets old! i mean damn, i was 13 once too. so i figured id be giving this one a zero across the boards. but actually, song aside, this was great. your visual style at first seemed a little jerky, but it smoothed out and by the end you really had me. i especially liked how the end referred to the beginning. nicely done. evanescence still belongs in the same suck category as avril lavigne, linkin park, creed, limp bizkit, and pretty much every newpunk rock band, but this was still a good flash.

meh

regarding the characters and music, i read that they weren't your choice. however, this is merely a tween fest. im not sure how exactly this took you four months to make, as the characters are very poorly drawn, and there is maybe two actual fbf animations. your visual style was actually pretty good as far as scene rotations and overall camera placement, but that is ruined by the character models and the constant tweening. im not judging this based on character models or music, although both suck too.

stellar

nice and random, made no sense but didnt leave me scratchin my head. good job, and excellent musical selection

what the

no idea whats going on, but its great.

right on

4 months? youre pickin it up quick. well thought out and well done... a few minor errors but with your experience its easily overlooked. great work and keep them coming!

WHAT punchline?

dont ruin the punchline? ok i wont... THERE IS NO PUNCHLINE! its a kid who gets a bad report card, and cant go out, so he rubs one out. whoopdefriggin do. are you serious? the one redeeming value is the sound effect was good, but the voice recording was crap. go watch a will farrell movie or something, figure out what a joke is. anything. i mean, christ dude i hear more punchlines on cnn.

grammar

im really so tired of people making notes about how long they took on things, or how much effort, and they cant even spell. im not looking for a grammar lesson, but jesus christ, learn the friggin language! if you dont speak english i can overlook things. either way, the first thing about this flash that jumps out is the amateurish nature of it. random sound clips dont count as audio. graphically, you need more practice. ive only been screwing around with flash for a few weeks and all my visuals look cleaner. remember, we dont know you, so your animation is our only exposure to you.. try to make it higher quality.

Flame-Reaper responds:

ok i agreee the gramma is shit, wot can i say i type to fast. But were in any part of my flash or my comentary have i mentioned how much time i spent on or how much effort the closest i came to that was saying it sounded funnier when my mate came up with the idea so before your give someone else a review weva it b gd or bad get ur facts rite.

"and in recent news, an animator on the notorious newgrounds.com went to his school, turned into a stick figure, and kept saying "pwned""

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