well...
graphics are 3 because they are all lifted bitmaps. style is a 2 because once again, its all lifted from gorillaz. sound is a 5, because it was transferred well but i cant give anything higher because its lifted from gorillaz. no violence. interactivity is a 2 because there are 3 buttons to push. i know its not a game, but i cant pretend it was interactive. humor is a 1 because i find gorillaz artwork friggin hilarious. overall 5.
im new to flash too. ive been animating with it about a month and a half and i should be ready within a week or two to submit my first to newgrounds too. but mine is an actual animation. im not dissing yours though, but it is relatively simple, and as far as all this stuff on newgrounds go, its a bit bareboned. but you cant use being new to flash as an excuse. secret messages in songs is kinda a niche interest, so you cut down your audience right there. lots of people on newgrounds like the gorillaz, myself included, so we all checked this out only to discover its about making secret messages in songs. a bit confusing, no?
i think you did a good job. focus more on original content, and i think youll do fine. dont give up on flash just ebcause of newgrounds. ive been checking this site out since 1998, and ive seen it go from just a bunch of toilet humor into being the premiere flash submission site. careers are made on this site sometimes, and as a result, competition is fierce. being blammed on the first try isnt the worst thing, and you havent had that happen. just get some thick skin, and keep churning it out. feel free to email me if you need any help or just need support in the scary worlds of newgrounds.